He said "They fill in the space don't they?".
she said "Who my friends! yeah they see to it that i don't feel lonely."
"Great! They take good care of you. Better than me" he said.
"Yeah they are great.Who needs anybody else?" she lied.
she said "Who my friends! yeah they see to it that i don't feel lonely."
"Great! They take good care of you. Better than me" he said.
"Yeah they are great.Who needs anybody else?" she lied.
Short and sweet :) Good one
ReplyDeleteThe long and short of it well expressed, Sneha:)
ReplyDeleteThis sounds like two strangers talking after a long time of not being together.. it certainly hurts.
ReplyDeleteCheers,
well that's for ppl to assume.. could be ex's talking after a long time.
DeleteThat's short and intelligent writing.. I always like the pieces of work that leave the readers guessing....
ReplyDelete:):)
wow..small and simple...excellant!
ReplyDeletethanks ankit :)
DeleteA beautiful game of bluff between two inseparable souls torn apart by the vicissitudes of fate that inexplicably reminds me of intimacy that Heathcliff and Catherine shared in Emily Bronte's Wuthering Heights...
ReplyDelete"Catherine Earnshaw, may you not rest as long as I am living! You said I killed you—haunt me, then! The murdered do haunt their murderers. I believe—I know that ghosts have wandered on earth. Be with me always—take any form—drive me mad! only do not leave me in this abyss, where I cannot find you! Oh God! it is unutterable! I cannot live without my life! I cannot live without my soul!"
Seems like a possible conversation in a teenage love / infatuation. :-)
ReplyDeletewell everyone can make their stories!! :)
Deletehuge meaning behind few words....:-)
ReplyDeletethamks priya!
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