As i count on the moments
waiting to get us close
i stop and wonder how should i react?
should i run to you and hold you tight in my arms?
should i just stand there and cry out my heart?
should i pretend to be angry and not talk?
or should i just stand numb and wait for your response?
As i count on the moments
waiting to get us close
i stop and wonder what should i say?
should i say i have missed you to extent you can't imagine?
should i say i love you like no one ever will?
should i ask why you kept me waiting so long?
should i ask will you go away again to break me all along?
As i count on the moments
waiting to get us close
i stop and wonder
is there a way i can stop you from not going back?
is there a way i can keep you all for myself?
is there a way i can be all yours with no fear?
is there a way i can be in your arms not worrying
you'd say i gotta leave in some time dear?
As i count on the moments
waiting to get us close
i stop and wonder is all this pain worth the love?
may be you will tell me..
may be we can talk it through..
may be i will know when you'll say 'baby,i missed you too'.
may be i will know because all i need now is to see you!
waiting to get us close
i stop and wonder how should i react?
should i run to you and hold you tight in my arms?
should i just stand there and cry out my heart?
should i pretend to be angry and not talk?
or should i just stand numb and wait for your response?
As i count on the moments
waiting to get us close
i stop and wonder what should i say?
should i say i have missed you to extent you can't imagine?
should i say i love you like no one ever will?
should i ask why you kept me waiting so long?
should i ask will you go away again to break me all along?
As i count on the moments
waiting to get us close
i stop and wonder
is there a way i can stop you from not going back?
is there a way i can keep you all for myself?
is there a way i can be all yours with no fear?
is there a way i can be in your arms not worrying
you'd say i gotta leave in some time dear?
As i count on the moments
waiting to get us close
i stop and wonder is all this pain worth the love?
may be you will tell me..
may be we can talk it through..
may be i will know when you'll say 'baby,i missed you too'.
may be i will know because all i need now is to see you!
Waiting is the most painful thing in this world, esp the wait which never gets fulfilled. Mine is one of them...
ReplyDeleteBut I hope yours does get fulfilled..
Beautiful and touching poem.
Loved it...
Take Care
hoping sweets mine will end too
Deletehope yours end too!!
take care dear
May your wait end very soon....:)
ReplyDelete:) it just did :)
DeleteInteresting & beautiful! :)
ReplyDeleteSuperb
ReplyDeleteIs waiting worth it?
ReplyDeleteThe dilemma nicely portrayed.
Keep Writing
Vikram Karve
Academic and Creative Writing Journal Vikram Karve
thanks a lot sir :)
DeleteI am really touched with this beautiful piece put down by you. I can relate to each word out there. Beautifully expressed. Keep writing! Kudos!
ReplyDeletethanks a lot kriti :)
DeleteBeautiful. The longing an dthe pining come out beautifully in the lines...Hope your wait ends soon, and on a memorable note :)
ReplyDeletethank you sudha
DeleteReally hate those feelings! Beautifully expressed, Lovely poetry Sneha!
ReplyDeletethank u dear :)
DeleteBeautifully written. Kudos!
ReplyDeleteyour last line says everything :) loved it.
ReplyDeleteA very beautiful poem with a lot of emotion shining from it. Nicely written.
ReplyDeletethank u :)
DeleteBeautiful! moments can sometimes become decades when it comes to waiting for someone.
ReplyDeleteawesome lines. right now am going through the same phase in my life..
ReplyDelete