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Friday, September 14, 2012

Distances Matter!

He stood there in front of her,smiling,hoping she would forgive him. She just stood there,eyes fixed on him, not knowing how to react. "Hi" he said from a distance and she stood mum. "Am here" he said coming close,unmoved she stayed wordless. He hugged her,smelled her hair whispered to her "Didn't forget me,did ya?". With those few words,being in his arms,her plans to not give away,be rude,angry just didn't seem to reach her face. At last she lost all her control and she cried. She cried till she choked,squeaked and her eyes swelled. She looked at him,made an attempt to speak,unable to she again hugged him and sobbed.
             It was after almost 6 months with minimum contact whatsoever that she actually saw his face .If the last time she knew it would be so long and so hard she would have never let him go. She still couldn't get hold on her tears. People passing by  watched them , but he didn't care. He knew he'd be kicked in nuts if he'd open his mouth but moreover he understood her pain,her tears. Wiping her tears he said "Enough now,am here.Lets go home". 

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  1. Dear Dr. Sneha Rahatekar


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    1. hey kiara thank you sp much!!!!!!!!!!!!! yeayieee!! :)

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  2. That was a my life playing out. Yes distances matter, in fact too much. My first visit and loved reading what you wrote, Dr. Sneha. Do come and visit Journey.

    http://rimlybezbaruah.blogspot.in/2012/09/is-this-love.html

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    1. thanks rimly :) :) :) read other posts too!!

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  3. Awww.....! This one highly expressive, Mam. I loved your thoughts.\m/ :)

    Rahul

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