He stood on the other side of road,
Comatose i watched him like a hawk
drowned in my deep thoughts
thinking "does he really love me?"
and you shook me with vigor
brought me to the surroundings
and said "stop staring at that fellow,
i am still alive"
i saw jealousy written all
over your face
and again into my deep thoughts i sank
thinking "yes he really does love me."
Comatose i watched him like a hawk
drowned in my deep thoughts
thinking "does he really love me?"
and you shook me with vigor
brought me to the surroundings
and said "stop staring at that fellow,
i am still alive"
i saw jealousy written all
over your face
and again into my deep thoughts i sank
thinking "yes he really does love me."
sweet and short
ReplyDeleteColloquy of bitter-sweet love :)
Thanks satish
DeleteWe should be content with what we have. Everything happens because it was supposed to be that way!!
ReplyDelete❤Not Just My Allegories❤
Agree anisha we shud b content.. But i thnk we make things happen,. :)
DeleteVery sweet <3
ReplyDeleteThanks cerena.. Very simple poem though
DeleteVery beautiful poem...
ReplyDeleteNot as gud as yours valli.. U write amazing
Deletedamn beautiful ........
ReplyDeletethanks vinisha :)
DeleteLovely poem ya
ReplyDelete:) :) thanks shilpi
DeleteI guess this is what we call, short and sweet :)
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