He said 'I have to be with her.
If i don't go, she might not
keep faith in anyone again'.
He said 'I need to hold her hand
If i don't, she might make herself so strong
to not let anyone be close again'.
He said 'I made her fall in love with me.
If i undid that, she won't
believe in fairy tales having a forever'.
He said 'I need to stand by her.
If today i back out, she won't
even look at me not today not ever'.
He said 'I know she can make it on her own.
I know she is that strong.
but i want to be there to catch if she falls.
He said 'I promised her a Life.
I promised her Me.
If i don't stay when she needs me the most
Tell me, What kind of a Man i be?
If i don't go, she might not
keep faith in anyone again'.
He said 'I need to hold her hand
If i don't, she might make herself so strong
to not let anyone be close again'.
He said 'I made her fall in love with me.
If i undid that, she won't
believe in fairy tales having a forever'.
He said 'I need to stand by her.
If today i back out, she won't
even look at me not today not ever'.
He said 'I know she can make it on her own.
I know she is that strong.
but i want to be there to catch if she falls.
He said 'I promised her a Life.
I promised her Me.
If i don't stay when she needs me the most
Tell me, What kind of a Man i be?
indeed .. love means commitment,responsibility and onus ... amazing lines Sneha !!
ReplyDeletethank you :)
DeleteNice choice of words...Stay blessed..!!
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This is one beautiful piece of poetry!! Loved it!
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Kriti
thanks dear!! hugs to u 2
Deletesuperb lines
ReplyDeletethis one I liked Sneha! It comprises of pain, sorrow and responsibility and commitment too :)
ReplyDeletethanks saurabh
DeleteThis is superb...i like the wordings and this poem is simply awesome...!!!
ReplyDeletethanks anjan
DeleteYour poems are amazing...I like them much...
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thank you so much kriti for the blog award!
Deletenice one...true intense feelings
ReplyDeleteIts really really cool
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