She hears her own words
cause he started the story and forgot to finish it...
She makes her self smile
cause he once made her laugh and left her with ocean of tears...
She keeps herself busy
cause doing nothing haunts her mind with his thoughts...
She lives with no emotions..
She lives for reasons she doesn't understand....
She misses him to no extent
Neither can she live with him
nor can she live without him....
cause he started the story and forgot to finish it...
She makes her self smile
cause he once made her laugh and left her with ocean of tears...
She keeps herself busy
cause doing nothing haunts her mind with his thoughts...
She lives with no emotions..
She lives for reasons she doesn't understand....
She misses him to no extent
Neither can she live with him
nor can she live without him....
touchy
ReplyDeleteSad and touching, you reflected the pain through poem beautifully Sneha!
ReplyDeleteIt feels killing when you are the one left behind..It hurt like someone has planted an acid rivulet inside you! Beautiful poem.
ReplyDeleteVery sensitive and heart wrenching.....Its story of almost all love stories....
ReplyDeletegood writing with simple words in a straight forward way
cant live with nor without..the bitter truth...poignant writing
ReplyDeleteIt is indeed a great thing to observe that one doctor who is busy in professional life is also an intellectual poet. Your poems touches the human heart and convey a deep meaning.
ReplyDeleteI like your poems hence i already joined as a member to your blog.
Being in Pune city i suggest you in your leisure time please go to Dr.Raja Dinkar Kelkar museum in Pune which is a Treasure House with many artifacts of Indian Heritage and Culture. Recently i am sharing one message in my Heritage of India blog with the title "Lamps of India". In this message i am sharing the images of Lamps collection of Dr.Dinkar Kelkar.
This is my Lamps of India message.
http://indian-heritage-and-culture.blogspot.in/2013/09/lamps-of-india.html
Please look into my Lamps of India message and share your inspirational comment.
I hope you like my blog and join as a member to my Heritage of India blog.
Only one word for this.. awesome...
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