Not once i looked back on him
Not once i tried to know how he'd be doing
Not once i wished him a last good bye
Not once i gave him a thoughtful smile...
Not once did i try to hear him out
Not once did i let out my anger and shout
Not once i said 'stay i need you now'
Not once i confessed i loved him somehow.
Not once did i reply his mail
Not once did i explain my hurting tale
Not once i held on to those tears
Not once i confronted him with my fears.
I let him go
I helped him disappear
I watched him be someone else's shine
and i stood by holding on to my aching heart
to fault over someone who from
beginning was never mine...
Not once i tried to know how he'd be doing
Not once i wished him a last good bye
Not once i gave him a thoughtful smile...
Not once did i try to hear him out
Not once did i let out my anger and shout
Not once i said 'stay i need you now'
Not once i confessed i loved him somehow.
Not once did i reply his mail
Not once did i explain my hurting tale
Not once i held on to those tears
Not once i confronted him with my fears.
I let him go
I helped him disappear
I watched him be someone else's shine
and i stood by holding on to my aching heart
to fault over someone who from
beginning was never mine...
This is touchy....nicely penned
ReplyDeletethank you :)
DeleteAhh! That's heart breaking!
ReplyDelete:) :) yeah
DeleteIts just morning for me and read it, feels really touching. Nicely done :)
ReplyDeletethanks dheeraj
DeleteHurting...it's very pining to read a poetry like this...
ReplyDelete"not once did a person feel how he/she would live in this world without his/her beloved...if they did they would have never let them go away"
Beautifully themed!
ReplyDeleteWell written!
ReplyDeletethanks sneha
DeleteSuperbly written - you write from the heart.
ReplyDeleteKeep penning such wonderful emotional pieces.
Vikram Karve
Academic and Creative Writing Journal Vikram Karve
thats so beautifully written! :) will look forward for more such writings
DeleteHeart-wrenching. Inexplicable pathos in your poems touch a chord in my heart.
ReplyDeleteIt reminds me of the favourite quote,"I you love someone set him free, if he comes he is yours, if he doesn't he never was!"
ReplyDeletevery true meenakshi
DeleteWow... i liked the flow ! it was well executed !
ReplyDeletethank you
Deletetouching lines.. well written..
ReplyDeleteA Rat's Nibble
Beautiful ....
ReplyDeletethank you
DeleteOh this is so very disturbing--your thoughts expressed so eloquently,they touch the heart.
ReplyDeleteam sorry if its disturbing.. but thank you :)
Deletekoi na jaane kya wo rahas hai... u flow even if he is there either ways... and thats the magic of this concept called LOVE...
ReplyDeleteagree bhargav
DeleteYou have captured the essence of many one-sided love stories.
ReplyDelete:) :) thank you :)
DeleteFreaks Sneha... You had me hooked from the very first line... :)
ReplyDeleteaawww!! sweetest compliment.. thank you :)
DeleteSimply written and effective in expression of her love towards him. :)
ReplyDeletethank you ")
DeleteIf you never said be yours he won't be yours. That too after avoiding him. He has tried his best. So its a natural thing to happen. No meaning in crying over it.
ReplyDeleteNo hard feelings intended. An open opinion.
no hard feelings taken.. its your opinion.. i respect it :)
Deletebut read the last line.. from beginning he wasn't mine.. no use telling someone you love them when they are already someone else's
Deletetouched!
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